VesperHimmel's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unhappy Town]

Interesting game, I like how it deals with the subject for the most part- I got some personal critiques that I can elaborate on later but am rushing a lil to make this reply kshsjahja- My main concern at the moment though is that some of the wording is confusing, so I'd reccomend revising the dialogue a little if possible.

Either way I'd like to see more of yer work :0

[Dragonsweeper]

i think im addicted to this now send help

[Cold]

CARPAL TUNNEL ACQUIRED

[Babel.EXE]

I got to test this game for review! I have a few inputs to give, though I am not a professional game reviewer or maker or anything so take everything I say with a grain of salt ^^'

The jumping is a little weird at times anti intuitive at times, especially in areas where you jump into a new room from below. Speaking of jumping- I can't seem to use WASD to move through the game menus, so I had to switch to arrows now and then. I also find using the space bar for attacking quite confusing though that's moreso a personal preference ;v;

Now plot wise... I love biblical inspired stories, though I can't say I see a lot of aspects of the original Tower of Babel tale other than the existence of other languages and the presence of the tower itself. If anything it reminds me more of the website "Library of Babel", which I am not quite sure if it's intentional or not but I figured it's worth mentioning :0

I also think revealing the plot twist midway through the story is a little harmful to the horror aspect your game was going for, as it is usually scarier to not understand what is going on at all. Not to mention the name Babel.EXE is a little cheeky when it comes to horror stuff -w-'

All in all though I found it relatively fun to play, so I think you're in a good track!! Keep it up >:]

GooseStranger responds:

Thank you for the response!

The weird jump is slightly on purpose, slightly on accident. Let's just blame it on the ZX Spectrum early computer inspiration jankiness lol.

I have never heard of "Library of Babel" but I'll check it out. Thanks!

I find the last part about the plot twist a little funny. I've had some comments where people are like "wait what even happened" after playing. It seems everyone finds out, or rather not finds out, what's going on at different points.

Thank you so much for playing and giving alllll this feedback!

[You Have To Go Fishing]

I know this is probably a silly game and that's it but I'm trying so hard to find the meaning of this

[SYNTAXIA]

HOLY FUCKING SHIT I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS

[FRIDAY NIGHT FUNKIN']

ill finally be able to actually play thanks yo my sister, wish me luck!

[Pico's School: Love Conquers All]

I actually like this much more than the original, it has nice messages and isn't all blood and murder and death lol. Although it has some dark implications such as Cassandra's true intentions and that BF was present during the same day of the school shooting...